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the god eaters
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“He was lean and menacing as a wild dog, and no matter how he hunched on the bench his presence crowded the jail car until it was hard to breathe in there.” – from Chapter 1
This is a rip-roaring Western with magic and gods mixed in, which takes you from the grittiness of prison to the wonders of a secret Eden.
Warning - not for anyone who doesn't like sex, violence, or gay relationships. Also, the prologue, while giving a lot of essential backstory, is badly written. I promise though as soon as you get through it, the rest makes up for it bigtime.
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Yeah, thanks, I really needed another story to read.
Watch out for the puddle of sarcasm. ;oP
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Haha! Sorry? It's well worth it though. Plus it's finished -- so it's not like you'd be waiting on edge for new updates.
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You're right, it was well worth it!
I thought some of the story went a little too fast at the end, as though the author had had enough and was trying to wind things up.
However, the characters were strongly drawn, and the history was woven into the storyline very well.
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Yay!
Yes I agree the end was rushed, wish he'd taken the time to deepen things a little... really the best bits for me were in the prison.
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