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chapter 14
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I don't know whether I'm dragging things out a bit too long, but I wanted to get some Jake/Lilith interaction in there, as well as show that Amber isn't all smiles and niceness.
I had a bit of trouble writing this, and ended up with nearly 3,000 words. So I cut it in half! Good thing is, Chapter 15 is basically written and just needs proof-reading, so I can get cracking on some bonus stories.
Also, need your opinion re: the background. I got a number of comments about the white text and dark background being hard to read, so I started putting PDF files up. Thing is, that takes more time and effort, and I don't know how many people would bother using it.
I figure those who don't mind light text / dark background, are equally not going to mind dark text / light background. It's the eye-weaklings who are pickier, so might as well satisfy them, no?
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Also, if you voted 'not sure' on the poll, it'd be good to know why.
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I liked the grey background a little bit better, but my eyes are being wonky today, so it's not a good day to gauge.
I liked this chapter for feel, but it left me wanting more, probably since it's only half a chapter, technically.
Lyn
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