http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-20 Above Ground Forum » Topic: chapter 20 en-US Mon, 06 Feb 2012 09:18:51 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.0.2 q http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/search.php http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-20#post-384 Wed, 25 Nov 2009 02:24:12 +0000 Lyn Thorne-Alder 384@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>That's what I'm for. I think it helps remind us that she's from a totally different culture. </p> <p>~L </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-20#post-379 Wed, 25 Nov 2009 00:39:28 +0000 amharte 379@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>I'm glad - I have been trying to include more of Lilith's cultural-ness in the story, to flesh her out a little. It's good you notice. :) </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-20#post-372 Tue, 24 Nov 2009 16:02:23 +0000 Lyn Thorne-Alder 372@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>I like the way Amber deals with the non-weres. I have, of course, many many questions. I also like Lilith's cultural wealth assumptions - nice touch! </p> <p>~Lyn </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-20#post-361 Tue, 24 Nov 2009 01:44:23 +0000 amharte 361@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Not much happens, but I oddly had fun with this chapter.</p> <p>The scene transition at the end is a little sudden but I couldn't think of a smooth way to just jump forward, and thought it would be boring to keep describing the blood-letting</p> <p>Thoughts? </p>