http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-18 Above Ground Forum » Topic: chapter 18 en-US Mon, 06 Feb 2012 09:15:58 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.0.2 q http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/search.php http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-18#post-326 Mon, 09 Nov 2009 17:11:21 +0000 Lyn Thorne-Alder 326@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Wow, I really got a feel for the town with that story... I can picture it in my mind. Well done!</p> <p>Lyn </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-18#post-320 Sat, 07 Nov 2009 16:27:30 +0000 amharte 320@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>I can give you a small clue as to why that ewte reacted weirdly to Lilith.... A similar thing happens in the bonus story <em>A Deal's A Deal</em>. ;) </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-18#post-315 Sat, 07 Nov 2009 03:33:55 +0000 Fantasy_Lover 315@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Just read part two... Very cool makes me wonder what powers Lilith has </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-18#post-311 Wed, 04 Nov 2009 00:15:29 +0000 amharte 311@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Only part 1 is up right now. Part 2 coming shortly. I *know* what needs to happen, the words just aren't coming, and the sore throat/headache ain't helping.</p> <p>Anyway.</p> <p>I had to include the werenutria - that was either Irk or Char's suggestion, I'm not sure whose.</p> <p>Re: the town, this is what I said to someone by email:</p> <blockquote><p>I see it as being more colourful than the city Lilith was in before, people a bit more relaxed since it's not as much a mafia area. I thought it'd be good for Lilith to see that it's not all gloom and doom above ground - people can be happy. [...] and I also thought it'd help Lilith's character development a bit. Maybe?</p></blockquote>