http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-15 Above Ground Forum » Topic: chapter 15 en-US Mon, 06 Feb 2012 09:17:09 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.0.2 q http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/search.php http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-15#post-245 Wed, 14 Oct 2009 18:12:34 +0000 amharte 245@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>POKE. </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-15#post-242 Wed, 14 Oct 2009 14:10:58 +0000 Lyn Thorne-Alder 242@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Poke me with a stick until I do this, please. I need regular poking to remember such things. </p> <p>L </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-15#post-210 Thu, 08 Oct 2009 18:49:33 +0000 amharte 210@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Look forward to your crit. :) </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-15#post-209 Thu, 08 Oct 2009 11:59:03 +0000 Lyn Thorne-Alder 209@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Aww! Silver is being almost nice!</p> <p>It's early for me, and this story deserves better commentary then that (I still owe you concrit on something else, too!) I'll be back later</p> <p>!Lny </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-15#post-208 Thu, 08 Oct 2009 02:56:36 +0000 amharte 208@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>This chapter was really tough for me.</p> <p>I dislike the initial scene; I think it's a little confusing with so many characters. Did my best to make things clear, but still think it could be better. It was tough, because Lilith has to witness it all but is not allowed to participate, and I like writing from the thick of things, not the outskirts.</p> <p>Then there's the jump forward in time. Lilith gets very emotional and moody. I can see why some of you may find that annoying, but I think it was about time: this is the first lull, without her worrying about being killed in the immediate future.</p> <p>I really like the backstory, the parents. I have a soft spot for angsty writing, I suppose, but I hope that you found those scenes moving as well.</p> <p>But, yes, this chapter does rollercoaster around with emotions, so apologies if you found that annoying!</p> <p>Thoughts and comments are, as always, greatly appreciated. </p>