http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-14 Above Ground Forum » Topic: chapter 14 en-US Mon, 06 Feb 2012 09:19:13 +0000 http://bbpress.org/?v=1.0.2 q http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/search.php http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-14#post-152 Thu, 01 Oct 2009 17:27:42 +0000 Lyn Thorne-Alder 152@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>I liked the grey background a little bit better, but my eyes are being wonky today, so it's not a good day to gauge.</p> <p>I liked this chapter for feel, but it left me wanting more, probably since it's only half a chapter, technically.</p> <p>Lyn </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-14#post-149 Thu, 01 Oct 2009 16:35:20 +0000 amharte 149@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>Also, if you voted 'not sure' on the poll, it'd be good to know why. </p> http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/topic/chapter-14#post-143 Thu, 01 Oct 2009 16:14:05 +0000 amharte 143@http://www.tenaciouscreatives.com/aboveground/ <p>I don't know whether I'm dragging things out a bit too long, but I wanted to get some Jake/Lilith interaction in there, as well as show that Amber isn't all smiles and niceness.</p> <p>I had a bit of trouble writing this, and ended up with nearly 3,000 words. So I cut it in half! Good thing is, Chapter 15 is basically written and just needs proof-reading, so I can get cracking on some bonus stories.</p> <p>Also, need your opinion re: the background. I got a number of comments about the white text and dark background being hard to read, so I started putting PDF files up. Thing is, that takes more time and effort, and I don't know how many people would bother using it.</p> <p>I figure those who don't mind light text / dark background, are equally not going to mind dark text / light background. It's the eye-weaklings who are pickier, so might as well satisfy them, no? </p>